Okay, so last night, me and [livejournal.com profile] tabaqui were talking and the subject of me writing fanfic came up. And then she dared and double dared and CHALLENGED ME!!! She challenged me to a drabble. She almost let the doggie dare out of his cage! So I had to relent and accept said challenge. The challange was a S/X drabble, 100 words exactly. No more, no less. So here it is. And it's behind the cut. Feedback is awesome, I've never written anything fannish before, so this is a definate first. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE comment and tell me how bad it is;)

BTW, it's S/X BtVS.


Title: Iced
Author: Chocgood
Pairing: S/X
Rating: Total G
*ehem* : I do not own these people, characters, or show, bla bla bla. Just hot and heavy with the (totally cannon) S/X ship.

Look at him, with those stupid big blue eyes. Seriously though, have I ever seen eyes like *those* before? I mean, they’re so – They’re big evil vampire eyes is what they are. Probably just waiting for me to get sucked into them. Big stupid sucking vampire. Who has eyes as cool as ice. His hands are pretty cool too…I wonder what they would feel like…NO! No, no, and no! I am not Buffy! I don’t boink or fall for the undead! Aw…look at him…So much in those damn eyes…And now – on no! – the eyebrow thing! I am such a goner…
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From: [personal profile] tabaqui


Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
Dude, i like it!
And i'm not just sayin' that, either. It's funny! And sweet.
HA!
And you said you couldn't write!
ppfffffffffffffffffftttttttttttttt

It's good, dude, really.
:)

From: [identity profile] chocgood84.livejournal.com

*squee*


Wow, from you (whom I consider the best fanfic author ever!), that's like a huge compliment. Thank you *jumps on you and licks your face*!!!

All right, so I could do that...I wonder if I can do something else...*starts pondering* Does someone else hear bunnies in the background?

*g*
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From: [personal profile] tabaqui

Re: *squee*


MUWAahahahahhaahhhaahaa.
*releases the winge'd bunnies*

And best author ever? Dude. My head is now officially so huge i don't think i'll ever be able to get through the door.
*hugs you*

From: [identity profile] chocgood84.livejournal.com

Re: *squee*


Heehee. Just call me the Tabaqui cheer squad. "Give me an S, give me backslash, give me an X!!! What does that spell...Tabaqui!!!" Er...yeah. Um...Fumes still?
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From: [personal profile] tabaqui

Re: *squee*


*snerk*
You silly thing.
*does chair dance of fan-having*
Wheeeeeeee!!!!
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From: [personal profile] tabaqui

Re: *squee*


Awwwwwww...Ummm...just write, and if it sucks you can just delet and write again. But, you know, there's always SOME little bit of good even if you delete a whole paragraph.
*bounce*
Horrible advice, isn't it? It's what i do, but i don't think it works well for others....
*sends bunnies and miricle gro*

From: [identity profile] chocgood84.livejournal.com

Re: *squee*


Well, I'm working on it. It's just slow going. I don't know if I'll post it though, cuz, eep!
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From: [personal profile] spikedluv


LOL I liked it! Loved Xander waxing not-quite-poetic about Spike's eyes! *g* Especially these: stupid big blue eyes...big evil vampire eyes...Big stupid sucking vampire. Who has eyes as cool as ice. Hee! So cute.

From: [identity profile] chocgood84.livejournal.com

*squee*


heehee. Yay! Two of my favorite fic authors enjoyed it. *does the dance of merryment* Aw shucks, you're just saying that ;)

Thank you *hugs*
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From: [personal profile] caviling


AW!

I'm incredibly impressed when people can fit their words to an imposed word limit.

From: [identity profile] nashmaveric.livejournal.com


Hee! poor Xander. And great Xander-babble, I can practically hear him in my head!

From: [identity profile] chocgood84.livejournal.com


Hee! Thanks. You think that's a lot of babble, you should read Boxless. That's all I got out was just Xander-babble.

From: [identity profile] stretfordditto.livejournal.com


Somebody needs to draw (Tenshi) an anime blue eyed Spike for that fic. You're fics are good, I've just discovered them. I'm printing off tootsweet. Dxxoo
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