synapticjava (![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
synapticjava) wrote2004-08-27 01:20 pm
synapticjava) wrote2004-08-27 01:20 pm
A Challenge!!!
Okay, so last night, me and ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
tabaqui were talking and the subject of me writing fanfic came up. And then she dared and double dared and CHALLENGED ME!!! She challenged me to a drabble. She almost let the doggie dare out of his cage! So I had to relent and accept said challenge. The challange was a S/X drabble, 100 words exactly. No more, no less. So here it is. And it's behind the cut. Feedback is awesome, I've never written anything fannish before, so this is a definate first. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE comment and tell me how bad it is;)
BTW, it's S/X BtVS.
Title: Iced
Author: Chocgood
Pairing: S/X
Rating: Total G
*ehem* : I do not own these people, characters, or show, bla bla bla. Just hot and heavy with the (totally cannon) S/X ship.
Look at him, with those stupid big blue eyes. Seriously though, have I ever seen eyes like *those* before? I mean, they’re so – They’re big evil vampire eyes is what they are. Probably just waiting for me to get sucked into them. Big stupid sucking vampire. Who has eyes as cool as ice. His hands are pretty cool too…I wonder what they would feel like…NO! No, no, and no! I am not Buffy! I don’t boink or fall for the undead! Aw…look at him…So much in those damn eyes…And now – on no! – the eyebrow thing! I am such a goner…
tabaqui were talking and the subject of me writing fanfic came up. And then she dared and double dared and CHALLENGED ME!!! She challenged me to a drabble. She almost let the doggie dare out of his cage! So I had to relent and accept said challenge. The challange was a S/X drabble, 100 words exactly. No more, no less. So here it is. And it's behind the cut. Feedback is awesome, I've never written anything fannish before, so this is a definate first. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE comment and tell me how bad it is;)BTW, it's S/X BtVS.
Title: Iced
Author: Chocgood
Pairing: S/X
Rating: Total G
*ehem* : I do not own these people, characters, or show, bla bla bla. Just hot and heavy with the (totally cannon) S/X ship.
Look at him, with those stupid big blue eyes. Seriously though, have I ever seen eyes like *those* before? I mean, they’re so – They’re big evil vampire eyes is what they are. Probably just waiting for me to get sucked into them. Big stupid sucking vampire. Who has eyes as cool as ice. His hands are pretty cool too…I wonder what they would feel like…NO! No, no, and no! I am not Buffy! I don’t boink or fall for the undead! Aw…look at him…So much in those damn eyes…And now – on no! – the eyebrow thing! I am such a goner…
no subject
Dude, i like it!
And i'm not just sayin' that, either. It's funny! And sweet.
HA!
And you said you couldn't write!
ppfffffffffffffffffftttttttttttttt
It's good, dude, really.
:)
*squee*
All right, so I could do that...I wonder if I can do something else...*starts pondering* Does someone else hear bunnies in the background?
*g*
Re: *squee*
*releases the winge'd bunnies*
And best author ever? Dude. My head is now officially so huge i don't think i'll ever be able to get through the door.
*hugs you*
Re: *squee*
Re: *squee*
You silly thing.
*does chair dance of fan-having*
Wheeeeeeee!!!!
Re: *squee*
Re: *squee*
I am not a peep show.
Throw FIC.
:)
Re: *squee*
Re: *squee*
I'm an ENABLER!!
*bounce*
Re: *squee*
Re: *squee*
*squeee's for a minute*
Re: *squee*
I'm stuck and can't write. Bleck.
Re: *squee*
*bounce*
Horrible advice, isn't it? It's what i do, but i don't think it works well for others....
*sends bunnies and miricle gro*
Re: *squee*
no subject
*squee*
Thank you *hugs*
no subject
I'm incredibly impressed when people can fit their words to an imposed word limit.
me too!
Thanks;)
no subject
no subject
no subject
no subject