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[synapticjava]

Here and now
I wait for you
I want for you
I cry for you
To come back to me
Here and now
I remember all you said
I remember all you promised
I remember all you loved
Me
Here and now
I nurse a bruised soul
I bind a broken heart
I dry my cracked tears
Because of you
Here and now
I am angry
I am sad
I am alone
Because you’re not
Here and now

Comments

[wildflowerfever.livejournal.com]

I realize that you aren't looking for critique, but I just wanted to say that I love the way that you bound the poem together with the last two lines...

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[chocgood84.livejournal.com]

Oh, thanks!

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[bloodroses27.livejournal.com]

I have to agree with Heather. Heh, maybe Reading Poetry did help your writing....or maybe it was Tori ;)

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[chocgood84.livejournal.com]

LOL. Well I don't think you've ever read much of my stuff. That's how I've always written. At least I think so. *shrugs* Kordecki would still majorly not like my writing. lol. it's *ALL* blank verse.

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[bloodroses27.livejournal.com]

Blaa...just 'cause she has a Dr. in front of her name....

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[chocgood84.livejournal.com]

LOL. Then again I write because I enjoy doing so and it gets stuff out of my system. I don't believe that I should be confined to rules in expressing myself.