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synapticjava ([personal profile] synapticjava) wrote2003-11-23 04:07 am

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Here and now
I wait for you
I want for you
I cry for you
To come back to me
Here and now
I remember all you said
I remember all you promised
I remember all you loved
Me
Here and now
I nurse a bruised soul
I bind a broken heart
I dry my cracked tears
Because of you
Here and now
I am angry
I am sad
I am alone
Because you’re not
Here and now

[identity profile] wildflowerfever.livejournal.com 2003-11-23 05:24 pm (UTC)(link)
I realize that you aren't looking for critique, but I just wanted to say that I love the way that you bound the poem together with the last two lines...