Date: 2006-01-31 09:18 pm (UTC)
"the heavy breaths of nightmare conquests"

I got spine tingles from that phrase, the kind I get from certain phrases in, oh, example, 'Under Milk Wood'. It works well read out loud too (yes, I just said it a couple of times- but I'm alone *grins*).

Hope you don't mind the beta-stylee comment, I know you weren't feeling great when you wrote these, hope you're doing better now.
*hug*
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