And I totally get what your saying. And no, I don't mind constructive critisism:P It's how we get better, innit? Trust me, every little bit helps, considering that his is my first major fic. And I am having quite a hard time getting into the flow of characterization - not nearly as easy as I thought. heh. But I'm hoping, especially in the next few parts that this comes together correctly.
As for the Spike's intense emotions - I see what your saying, but trust me - it'll all be explained in time:)
Thanks for the FB honey, I really really appreciate it!
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Date: 2004-09-29 02:49 pm (UTC)And I totally get what your saying. And no, I don't mind constructive critisism:P It's how we get better, innit? Trust me, every little bit helps, considering that his is my first major fic. And I am having quite a hard time getting into the flow of characterization - not nearly as easy as I thought. heh. But I'm hoping, especially in the next few parts that this comes together correctly.
As for the Spike's intense emotions - I see what your saying, but trust me - it'll all be explained in time:)
Thanks for the FB honey, I really really appreciate it!