ext_138879 ([identity profile] wildflowerfever.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] synapticjava 2003-11-23 05:24 pm (UTC)

I realize that you aren't looking for critique, but I just wanted to say that I love the way that you bound the poem together with the last two lines...
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