ext_38254 ([identity profile] writan-bur.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] synapticjava 2005-09-15 05:34 am (UTC)

Lovely chapter!

And you really managed to capture the awkwardness of finding out one of the group had a break-up, and no one is sure how to react.

Great work!

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