ext_38254 ([identity profile] writan-bur.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] synapticjava 2005-09-07 05:41 am (UTC)

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

Lovely chapter! *bounces*

And I adored this little bit:
He turned the knob to ‘boiling’ and pressed the lever for the shower, instantly rewarded with a rain of water hot enough to melt the plastic shower curtain rings. At first his body tensed, instinctively trying to get away, but after a minute he could feel all of his pores and cells opening to the warmth, drinking deep. A chill ran up and down his spine, and he moaned softly at the sensation. His eyes closed, and he breathed deep.

Wonderful description there.

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