I really enjoyed this! You got to show off your great descriptive skills. The moon is such a beautiful image, and you do it justice. I always have such a hard time describing things. When I write, people talk, look at each other, and occasionally stand or sit. I cannot find a way to write all the tweeny bits that make a story so engaging. Oh well.

BTW, I have a question for you about lj. I am going to post something in the next couple days, and I wanted to post it to Bloodclaim too. I noticed that sometimes people post stuff in the actual community and other times they post a link that goes to where they posted it in their own lj. If I wanted to do the latter, would the link I give just be what's in the browser after I post to my own lj? I hope that question is clearly asked.