Hehe, that was funny. It had me snickering into my latte` (seriously!) the smut was all good and more than a little hot.
"Spike was on his knees behind him doing the sweetest (and isn’t that an odd word to describe *that*) thing with his tongue Xander had ever felt. Spike pressed in and out of him with his tongue, and with every move Xander thought that it would be just the right one to send him over the edge." mmmm liked that especially!
Only one nitpick - 'soooo' got a bit boring.