Ah, this is so sweet and romantic I love it. A lot of slash I've read is way too angsty and nasty, I'm not into Mills and Boon but it doesn't hurt to have something pleasant to read. I like the way you built the tension and held it almost to the last.

"Before his very eyes, the great golden pendulum that carried all life sank beneath the concrete abyss. He gazed upon the last fading streaks and glitter of gold and red and violet until at last all that existed was himself and the stars above. The silent witnesses that had been there since time began and shall be there when it ceases." *nice*

Jo